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It wasn’t
exactly how she planned it, but it was a New Year’s Eve celebration at the Chambers
B&B. Leslie couldn’t believe it, the party she dreaded planning was a
success. Everyone raised their champagne glasses, ringing in the New Year. After
an hour of dancing and drinking the crowd thinned out, and one by one they went
on their way, just like at Times Square, which magically empties out after the
ball drop. During the evening she was swept away by the excitement, but when it
was over she felt a wave of loneliness knowing Kevin wasn’t there.
She glanced
over at the Christmas tree, the lights flickering almost in rhythm to music
that softly played. What is that? She noticed a well wrapped present beside the
tree, a lovely box with a gold ribbon. It sat next to the fake presents she
displayed under the tree that was just for decoration. Where did it come from?
She walked over to the box and picked it up. There was a gift tag tucked
underneath the bow, she immediately recognized the handwriting, it was from
Kevin. She looked around, she was alone. She carefully pulled off the ribbon
and opened the box. Inside was a note,
You never know when you might need this. She smiled as she pulled out a
small flashlight attached to a rope chain, just like the one Kevin used to get
them out of the woods last week when they stayed too out too long. A blanket of
warmth wrapped around her and settled in her heart as she recalled chiding him for
his collection of flashlights. Her heart beat faster remembering how he held
her hand securely and lead the way with his trusty little flashlight. Damn it,
she didn’t want to but maybe she was falling for him… again.
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What a wonderful scene, Carolyn. I love that she found such a special gift from Kevin as she was feeling lonely. Great job also with the New Year's description.
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful story! Love the flashlight as an image and what it stands for between them. Love your writing and this story already has me sucked. in. Welcome back, Carolyn.. I've missed your work.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful scene!
ReplyDeleteHey, you've been holding back from me. This story is great. The setup was good and I'm definitely wanting to read more about the relationship.
ReplyDeleteWhat an evocative gift. Great job.
ReplyDeleteNICE! I love it - the significance of the present is great too. Well done.
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